Black Poetry : Love JOYnts (puff session I)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Feb 3, 2003.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (inhale)

    i sedate seconds to
    s...l...o...w them down
    to STOP time to have TIME to
    experience you from your
    birth to the next (you)nar
    eclipse of you standing over me
    naked blocking doubts
    that God is the creator
    of miracles...the illumination
    that traces you is wonderful
    ...and i...between counting aches
    that jump fences and reincarnated
    desires that rise in the morning/
    see you in many shades of brown
    breaking me down and breast feeding
    all of the elements that compose me

    (hold)

    [you make my palette weep...tasting you
    is better than breathing]

    the seconds wake from their slumber
    into a new day...the hands have started
    new revolutions [that's what love is]
    what will be our cause this lifetime?
    we can break the windows of past pains
    and burn down buildings of lonely bodies
    and rebuild them into satisfied santuaries
    where we can take refuge from a long
    journey of "everyday living"...and get lost
    in the cause of enjoying each other
    without apology to the world of
    overindulging ourselves with

    you
    with
    me

    (exhale)


    (c)2003 blakverb "warming up"





    minute i
    can love you...i can love
    you forever
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah BOYEEEEE!!!! I love how you laid this one down!!!
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    garrison.


    ...you are phenomenal!!

    & i ain't just sayin' that 'cause...
    ...well... you know! :D

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    Dug it bro!!! On to the next episode...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yesssssssss!!!!! da love vibe is riding high!
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My God!

    That was something special write there, you opened up the box of Pixy dust did ya, and put some stank on this little poetry challenge...whewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Breathtaking!:toast:


    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't like the way you put.."warming up" down the bottom of this peace here...because if this is warming up...then the ladies are in trouble!!!
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for "smoking" with a brother.

    blak
     
  9. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...****...!

    ::breathing::
     
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