Black Poetry : Love JOYnts (final puff)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Feb 7, 2003.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it all really about competition?
    me loving you and you trying to out"LOVE" me
    and you loving me and me trying
    to out"LOVE" you...if we are both
    trying to out"LOVE" the other who's
    going to be IN LOVE?

    you trying to out"taste" me and me trying
    to out"taste" you definitely felt good
    and I think the both of us are skilled artisans
    at that oral thang...and...

    you trying to wear me out and adorn
    yourself with my sweat at Love's club
    and me sharp as a tack wearing you out
    until our hips ache and fall asleep
    into Oshun's lap is
    wonderful...

    but is it really about competition?
    and if we both work hard at loving
    the other who really loses? we both
    end up pleased...
    so competition is moot, but the effort
    releases reclusive desires that inspire
    angels to save the lonely who laugh outloud
    to outsound their crying...

    that floods their dreams.

    so all we need to do is just love.
    no need to compete.

    (c)2003 blakverb
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak...man you still cranking them out!!!!!! put the finishing touches on this week my brotha!!!
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    garrison.

    shaddup!! :tongue: :lol:

    a lil' competition is quite healthy!...
    ...it builds character. (LOL) & besides tryin'
    to be the last one on top... (pun intended :lol: )
    is part of the fun!

    i be lovin' your style, chile!! but you already know that!

    elayne.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brother bishop - I'm trying

    elayne - sister, you know the biz
     
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