Black Poetry : Love Jones

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would lie if I said I didn't...........
    That I didn't have 2 have u
    Lill by lil each day
    I wanna make u feel as much as I do u
    That this $hit aint no lies
    I wanna please u in the mos subliminal ways
    I picture inside my sheets
    I invision u inside my soul
    Not mocking my impecarious ecelestrial feelings
    I feel something
    Undeniable
    Unexplaniable
    It burns like acid inside my heart
    Becasue U don't have what I ambition
    The love from ur heart
    The touch from ur hand
    And the kiss from ur lips
    As I dream of u in my mind
    Closing my eyes
    When r u goin to be mine?
    When r u goin to understand?
    I wanna be the one 4 u
    I know no other woman can please u
    So give me the cance 2 prove that 2 u
    Let me be that one that fills ur aspritaion
    Let me be that perfect invision of a woman
    Enduring
    Black
    and Beautiful
    Would u give me that chance?
    Im askin in the most sincerest form
    Because I know I can show u how are should be loved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U can show me
    love me
    as i do of u
    just let the heart
    really be true
    I've vision u too
    in my room at night
    under soft music
    and candle light
    where we caress
    confess our souls
    inside this burnning
    desire of fire we pose
    i want u to show me
    just love only me
    give your all as i do
    feel my whisper
    my ambition that's
    screammin to touch
    to hold and comfort
    sho me prove it
    no other man can
    give what i can
    please understand
     
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    I'm loving this ebony!
    Great poem!:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely Poem
    Sister Ebony Queen
    You can have any chance you want
    Feeling this Love Jones Flava
     
  5. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u I was reallllllllllllly in tha zone for some reason when I wrote this listen to the Love Jones CD track number 16
     
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    sometime the feeling come ya u just flow with it
    this was awesome again tyte joint u laid out ....
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo poet flow on.:kiss1:
     
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    I'm reading this and hearing in my mind..
    ......I got a Love Jones....I got a Love Jones..
    ...I got a Love Jones
    very nice read from u ebony
     
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    girl i am really feeling this....keep writting poet....
     
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    You're telling him so that he knows, no doubt about that. Enjoyed your flow.
     
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