Black Poetry : LoVe JoNeS Rhythm

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May I simply play love chords with your mind
    from the
    back
    to the
    front
    on this
    O~U~T~E~R

    C
    ~
    O
    ~
    U
    ~
    R
    ~
    S
    ~
    E

    kind of rhythmic love tip
    G~R~O~O~V~E
    I exude?

    Tongue kissed memories
    strummin'
    U & ME
    soulfully
    I~N~tact
    in a gently
    hummed synergy

    D~r~E~n~C~h~I~n~L~y
    moist from the sweat of
    epiphanies that reverberate
    in heat
    to make me release

    S~T~E~A~M~Y
    yet
    C~R~E~A~M~Y
    inclinations of
    a lover’s
    LoVe JoNeSin' moan
    so
    soft
    &
    oh yeah
    so
    sweet

    As I
    L~I~C~K
    &
    S~T~R~O~K~E
    UR body’s harmony
    with just one touch
    of my mental teasin'

    S
    U
    R
    E
    L
    Y

    THAT'S
    the reason
    why
    your liquid notes are so
    intoxicatingly wet to my
    impassioned love poet senses

    Dare I nibble upon your mental
    I~N~N~(H)~E~R self
    like a silky Michael Franks
    type of
    in-the-mood
    smooth?

    or

    Should I just tell you all about it
    with the size of my own personal
    tune that suggests
    how to tickle one another’s
    mind to musically be inclined to
    sultry chorus?

    This play we play is like an
    old school LP record but the
    taste is like a compact disc
    with tracks emanating
    from a
    LovE JoneS rhythm style of song

    Lyrically
    &
    with a
    G~E~N~T~L~E~M~A~N
    of
    Q~U~A~L~I~T~Y
    sugary
    finesse

    I’ve come to
    U~N~D~R~E~S~S
    your soulful ebony keys
    with my
    P~O~E~T~I~C~A~L
    best

    Yeah that lover’s
    LovE JoneS melody
    sounds real good
    to your secret earhole
    right now…
    I’ll bet

    QInc2006 - All Rights Reserved
     
  2. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the rhythm of this piece. I would like to hear it performed one day. Maybe on the Friday Night Throw Down? Great Job Poet!

    Napturally
     
  3. watzinaname

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    Words so strategically placed, this was certainly a sultry vibe you've scribed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome creation welcome back home GQ.......
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

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    Welcome Back GQ:
    And I truely hope you stay a while.
    Passionately and creatively done.
    Nice & Hott just like I like them.

    Much luv
     
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    this was a preety hot piece
    i was really feeling the concept
    originality is the key
    8/10-powerful flow
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Dang poet

    back with a tremedous bang

    mac-in' it crazy
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Poets!

    All,

    Thanks for the read on this scribe - my first creation in what seems like ages. Uncle Sam had a brotha tied up for a minute but all is now settled so I am back to catch the muse vapors up in here to hopefully get re-inspired to share my love poetry!

    Always Peace/
    GQ
     
  9. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ MM MM MM SUGA PERFECTION IS ALL I CAN SAY

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
    MM MM MM :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  10. nevar

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    man my eyez got enough and im like foaming. eyez are roaming off the visual you given me. this got to be what ive been looking for and so much more

    hold it down poet for real!!!!!!!!!!
    :welldone:
     
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