Black Poetry : Love is

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Jul 9, 2001.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is non negotiable,
    indecipherable,
    unexplainable,
    definitely incredible
    and always unbelievable.

    Love is.

    It could be the best thing,
    or the worst thing;
    the right thing
    or the wrong thing;
    the first thing
    or the last thing.

    Love is.

    It could bring joy,
    it could bring pain;
    but it must never be contained,
    or just reside within your brain.

    For Love is.

    It must be felt it,
    it must be touched,
    make you heady,
    make you blush;
    make you want it oooh so much!

    It is the quiet of the night,
    dripping sheets and muscles tight,
    rhythmic moves and whispered vows
    that live in minds of here and now.

    It's walks in parks long after dark,
    it's joy filled days and smiles that stay
    it's vulnerable,
    it's venerable;
    to everyone accessible,
    and always, always, possible!
    Yes! Love is indescribable!!
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    A haha HA

    true talent poet!

    where have you been?LOL

    don't do that..


    just disappear and reappear
    but, it's all good

    just as long as u always come
    back

    peace

    poeticd
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, it is. i'm lovin' this piece, heyah. very nicely done.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES INDEED !! LOVE HOW U SPELL LOVE
    U PAINTED A PICTURE PERFECTION
    TELL IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is . . .

    . . . a pain the ***, the itch that can't be scratched and the sweet pain that we actively seek--I think you captured it all right here--well done--Amun-Ra

    Where do you stand on abortion? Check out Amun-Ra's new column "Abortion--Both Sides Now" and state your opinion on this controversial subject at:

    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=2878
     
  6. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    poeticdelight, thank you for the kind words. I've been around. I like to write on different forums, it gives me a good feel for how I am writing and also exposes my warped mind to different flavors of writing. Thanks for asking.


    Lister, I appreciate the time you took to read the poem.


    Sherykah. Thank you also for taking time to read the poem, glad you thought it a must read.


    RICH. You should get an award on this board. I think you're the most consistent supporter of all poets here. Thanks and keep up the good work of encouragement. A question for you. Why do you write in caps? Sometimes it makes it hard for me, personally, to read your works.. just an individual quirk.

    Amun-Ra, for sure love is the ultimate itch. Thanks for the read and the word of encouragement.


    JAH Bless ya all.
     
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