Black Poetry : Love is Like a .38

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  1. AcidRayne916

    AcidRayne916 New Member MEMBER

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    Love is like a .38
    Aimed at a sistah's heart
    Bullet soaring through the air
    Will it hit it's mark?
    Straight through your chest it flies
    Blood stains the wall
    Breath quickly leaves your chest
    And very slow you fall
    Time goes on forever as you take your final breath
    The last thought to pass your mind is
    "****, there's no time left"
     
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    Oh babygurl, u are right on the mark, nezt time wear a love proof vest. I'm wearing mine...
     
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    man, that hit home fa real, !! real tight gurl.
     
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    feelin it

    Im goin through pain right now myself. You get mad props for this poem. Simple and sweet pain is love baby
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so real so true i felt it !!!!!
    welcome to destee playground of love
    welcome to da house of peace
    as i roam above send u luv
    welcome within family & friendz u be kin now
    welcome !!
     
  6. AcidRayne916

    AcidRayne916 New Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou for all the love that I'm getting, I was so nervous to post my poem on here, I've never shared any of my poetry before.
    Love, Peace and Nappyness
    :thanks:
     
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    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like your work...keep posting. I don't get to the boards often but when I do, it is cool to find new folks in da house...;-)
     
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    I liked yo poem love is like a 38 a baretta a semi auto all of em they all break yo heart. But heres a hint boo carry ya own i reccomend the baretta. lol :O loved yo poem keep flowin welcum ta the family even tho they ain't welcomed me lol

    peace and blessins-----------serenit
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oops i mean serenti lol
     
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