Black Poetry : love is eternal

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was a question

    “Where does love go
    When they don’t love you…no mo’”

    An interesting subject for discussion

    Love is eternal
    But not eternally yours
    As doors to your heart
    Slams shut
    At rejection’s wake

    Love is eternal
    But often
    Her heart isn’t eternally free
    To intertwine with mine
    So, she flees the boundaries of
    Philosophy

    Love is eternal
    But are we internally gifted
    To lift the burdensome weight
    Of loneliness
    From an empty heart
    And bless it with a smile

    If love is eternal
    Then let me feel the presence of
    Its melody
    As I close my eyes and imagine
    A “you and me” that will last
    Eternally.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved very poetic
     
  3. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was really feeling this Baller!!!!
    I'll be waiting for mo'
    1Love
     
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    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here...In my heart
    lies a flame,
    burns brightly,
    intensely...
    Love's harmonic rhapsody
    surrounds we
    eternally.....

    How do you do..what you do?!?
    Lovin this piece!
    Jyntl
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm...DIIMOND...THANKS for the love.

    Jyntlbreez...THANKS for the warm embrace as your gentle breeze sweeps over me...touching me, deeply...eternally.:)

    1luv
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seems like such a long time ago.

    o, well. here we go again.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and this tyme round i know da love is eternal and grand
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH!!
    I lovin' this honesty of this.
    A new favorite of mine.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I said it once I'll say it again brother...
    You're a born motivational speaker :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are so many different shades of love, and truly enjoyed the way you captured the essence therein. Thank you for bringing this one back poet.
     
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