Black Poetry : Love is a [email protected]

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  1. quest

    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    what's up fam sorry i kind of been out for a while but still writing. you have to excuse this one it was off the top my emotion but i hope you feel it the same.

    -whatever you call it-

    I die slow but live quick
    I move closer to my goal
    but the ground is too thick
    of challenges...
    challengers...
    that challenge my purpose in life.

    ****- I must admit that this was one of my roughest night
    as I tried to survive...the...mental lashing...
    emotional thrashing...
    and low-down right dirty
    bad mouthing and thrashing.

    Why against me?

    Did I hurt every single societal emotion
    or did societies' emotion just decide to f__k with me. :censored:

    Why must this pain be stuck to me
    and influence the way I see you...
    I look at you...
    I feel your presence differently now

    so will this survive
    although silence captures me
    your love can fulfill the rapture of we
    or did we let it go?

    I die slow but live quick
    I move closer to my goal
    but the ground is too thick
    of challenges...
    challengers
    that challenge my purpose in life.

    My black sista with scars, tears, and strife that always has a problem with the black man
    because we are all dogs?
    or did you really dog yourself??

    1 is not always wrong
    2 can also help :idea:
    as you walk blindly into a situation
    head first...
    head strong...
    but dead wrong...
    cuz you think you heard what you really heard. :confused:

    Now you die slow and live quick
    you move closer to your goals
    now the ground is too thick for you
    because you didn't check your feet
    and now you are up in s__t :censored:
    because you problemed a fix...
    thinking that you could fix a problem.

    a situation that was straight
    and now mixed...
    chased...
    intoxicated no longer pure
    something respected...

    But this pain is stuck to me
    and I'm influenced when I see you...
    watch you...
    I look at you...
    I no longer feel you.

    I hope you enjoyed the piece.

    quest ( ache el )
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed it very much....Keep it coming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Quest

    dis here is felt fo sho .......relax and keep flowin :cool:
     
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    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    Well appreciated

    RICH--glad you enjoyed man and thanks for the words of encouragement...spread the word i want people to read this one

    Bishop--one time for the love man...keep reading and i'll keep writing...

    quest ( ache el )
    greatmindsgreatworkgreatpeoplegreatpoetry
     
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    Love is a B*@%h

    quest,
    I am a new member. I really do not write, but I love to read poetry and this one stuck out to me b/c I can relate in a whole lot a ways. Anyway, I am really feeling this.

    Keep your flow going and remember listen to your heart b/c you might pass up something new and that something new might be something right(you might just have to take a chance b/c you will never know if it's right for you).
    Some times we are not true to our feelings, to ourselves and to others. Keep it real!

    Think about this "Is love really the B*&@H?????"
    Keep writing my black brotha
    suga
    --listentoyourmindbodyandsoul--
     
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