Black Poetry : Love In This Lifetime

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Jan 29, 2003.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have been immersed in love to
    the depths that no one except you
    or I will ever know

    and...

    I
    admire
    that

    The kind of inner hurt that has
    me crying my heart out in waves
    of emotions that only serve to
    capture the essence of...

    a
    mating
    of
    souls

    Anxiously I await your sweet
    melody upon my ears and the
    sight of loveliness stirs a passion
    in me so deeply felt that...

    I
    just can’t help
    but
    to cry

    My matured obsession is quiet yet
    consciously aware as I gesture
    with throes of delicate ambiance
    to feed my hunger for love; since...

    you are
    nestled
    right here
    within
    me

    Restless days and nights embrace a
    forlorn wanting; ringing loudly but
    remains unheard to those who are

    empty
    without
    love

    To hold onto your soul is, as it has
    always been, my greatest pleasure

    My reason for loving you tenderly
    and compassionately is a secret not

    You
    "complete"
    me

    &

    You
    are
    all that I have
    &
    surely

    all that
    I
    shall
    ever need...


    in this
    lifetime

    ©GQINC2K3
     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever been so in love that the sight of them brings tears? Brang um! This touched me. Very nice GQ.
     
  3. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    you have such a way with words this is soul stiring
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm u kinda early aintcha??????? nonetheless you know i love the way you do love



    One
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dat's it
    see ladies bruthas got da love thang in hand
    man u came correct to a perfection
     
  6. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ....
    As usual it is a pleasure to my soul
    to see your heart unfold
    into these manifestations of the purest love
    found only in the union of two hearts becoming one.......

    I don't get on this website too much due to my schedule,
    but when I do, I always look for a beautiful flow from you...
    Many blessings & Much love to ya!!!
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ GOT MAD GAME! 1poetsought
     
  8. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful it almost brought me to tears! Very touching work!
     
  9. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ....

    This a beautiful piece, truly touching...


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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