Black Poetry : Love in the purest form

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Aug 13, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Meetin her was like serendipity
    made with such grace; formed with such serenity
    In all honesty
    she was created from prosody
    with prolific beauty and is probably
    related to the Greek goddess Athena
    with her wisdom and artistic demeanor
    Her smile sets sunsets and yes, she's fine
    But I look at her and her beauty shines thru her mind
    And personally
    I think god purposely
    placed her in my hands
    so we can take eachother to distant lands
    somewhere similar to fairytales
    cuz she is my cinderella, snow white, Princess Jasmine - Ariel
    Her lips are the key to heaven's gate
    Im locked in her aura without a light of escape
    When she touched me 4 the 1st time
    that smooth criminal committed her 1st crime
    its got to be a curse to be that fyne
    When I hold her
    my heart weighs heavy like a bolder
    The standard definition of paradise aint got sh*t on the taste of her "nani"
    When Im thirsty, I let her juices be my Disani(H20)
    And when Im lovin her ocean, surfin on the longest tide
    She gives it to good... with the strongest vibe
    And when she's on top of me grindin
    Im findin
    it hard to keep my eyes open
    while Im chokin
    on the words Im moanin
    She got that "good god" movement
    with the "lord have mercy" tools to do it
    The word "[email protected]!" was invented when she was born
    thats why what we have is love in the purest form...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up like how u did this wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ya on hit here
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely laid..flow on....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You dropped this one like da bomb that it is. Keep flowing, this was extremely sensual.
     
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    She sounds so incredibly wonderful!
    The way she touched your soul
    and the way you put her into
    words, makes her any womens
    envy!!!!!!

    Beautiful, Beautiful, write!!!!!!!!
     
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    Now, see.. I wanna be in someone's poem! That was beautiful! Just bee-yoo-tee-ful!
     
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    :jawdrop: Well now isn't that blazin. Beautiful, too, dawg. I love it when you drop a flow on us. This is tight.
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice.
    very nice.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, now this was so gullie (another word for, tyte). I like the rhymes set on this flow. I was totally floored.

    Flow on, poetic sistah.
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks yall

    I wrote this poem from the depths of my soul... I really felt this one. Im glad yall did too. Much luv n respect...
     
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