Black Poetry : Love in Perfection...(My Black Brother)

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My black brother
    Can’t take my eyes off you
    Expression of words can’t bring the true meaning
    Of a poetic phase with words
    I can’t speak or begin to write
    And unraveling chapter of truth
    A book of freedom
    Justice that can’t be explained
    In simple terms…

    Your always on my mind
    My Black brother
    Rare to perfection in its own
    The passion you bring
    You’re just to good to be true
    Unexpectedly you appeared
    Within this untouched dream
    Touched…..

    The taste
    Within the passion
    Caressing my soul
    Taking me to levels unseen
    My words are lost
    ….As my mind roams
    No one can tell me different

    My black brother
    Compassion ally
    Mentally seducing
    Conversation you bring
    Engaging in stimulation
    With one kiss
    Divine precision
    Like fine wine
    As time grooms you
    Smooth and sexy
    I am lost for words

    The look
    Your walk
    That talk
    Just your style says it all
    It is only you of rare deed
    “Chocolate/caramel/honey toned/licorice/espresso”
    (Copy written by my Sister Triniti)

    My Black King
    From dreads to bald to a low cut
    A soul that calls me
    A spirit that holds me true
    No other way to be
    I love my black brother
    Your Wisdom that runs deep
    Like a the black river flowing
    In a smooth celestial waterfall
    Over the clouds and through the stars
    Oh my black brother
    Your full lips
    That essence
    With strength
    The pride
    Just to good to be true
    I can’t stop thinking about you
    I love you...My King

    In heavens arms you were born
    Molded just for me as my rib fits yours
    My black brother

    Can’t get you off my mind
    The way you walk
    The way you talk
    The style you bring
    The warmth you have
    A divine rapture
    That captures me
    Time and time again

    My Black Brother
    Can’t take my eyes off you
    When God molded you
    He gave me my King
    No other can compare
    Your just to good to be true

    (c) 2005
    Black Souls of Poetry
    The Truth Unseen
     
  2. triniti424

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww suki suki now hehehe
    now THAT is what I am talkin bout LOL
    what betta muse for something as precious as poetry otha than da BEAUTIFUL BLAK MAN himself
    lovely lovely lovely my sista :read: hehehe
    now for all of you sistas who enjoyed this and agree...mosey on downstairs to da sistas forum and join in on our "REASONS WE LOVE OUR BLAK KINGS" thread hehehe
    props my sista props :) :read: :)
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dangggggggg did you leave any praise for the other men? hahahaaaa well I must say I feel the glide you're on, stay there, it's all good.
    Awesome blend, all the wealth coouldn't touch it...you gave a grand stand...for your black man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    wow wow wow ! this was outstanding and beautiful
    the love u pose for the chocolate man whewwwwwww!
    u go gurl let it flow some mo !
     
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    Your love searches me
    As I reach out to it
    My black brother
    Your just to good to be true
    Like heaven, I touch the sky
    A rapture of divine sweetness
    Always leaving me weak
    My black brother
    Your scent captured me
    Loving your vibe
    Loving your touch
    Loving you is all I know how to do
    No other way to be
    Love you all day
    Through the night
    My black brother
    Can’t take my eyes off you
    My words roam
    And my love grows
    Oh my King heaven awaits
    ....I love you my Black Brother
    Your one of a kind
     
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    Trini....thanks sis the love of my black brother is like a light that never goes out...no matter the fuss the love still shows only one way to be ya nno!!!!

    QT....all i can say is i love chocolate...mmmhmmm the love they have inside once they know its true to them is a grand stand attraction....

    Rich....I love you My beautiful Black Brother...thanks for the loving support


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MzBlk
    You always have a way of expressing the deepest emotions. :hearts2:
    Taking the mind on a trip love on a two way street. This poem is so lovely, and inspiring. Thank you for sharing the perfection. :kiss1:

    You say you love the stride I have in my walk.
    You love the way, I hold you and talk.
    I love the way you let me know.
    I’m all you desire and I love you more.

    I like how you expressed the love we have.
    How you expect the best of everything I have.

    I won’t hesitate to give you my all.
    I promise to be there, your all I need.
    That’s not all.

    I LOVE the way you can bring out my best.
    No other head has a place on my chest.
    My shoulders are yours to lean on in need.
    My mind is your canvas to paint.
    It is you.
    I need.

    Your caress I can count on.
    To keep me above the daily grind.
    Only you on my mind.

    Never loosing focus I carry you away.
    To the place you helped create in this world.
    Storms outside, makes me hold you.
    Closer those are my best times.

    Dear heart my black sister, your one of a kind.
    No other can tell me, console me or meet.
    The level of heaven you give to my grief.
    No other can understand my woes.
    I love you dear heart head to your toes.
    It is more than physical.

    It is dear in my mind.
    I know true love.
    It is you.
    I have true love
    Only for you.

    Keep holding me.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel...

    The only thing you make a brotha wanna do is :D.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of us...letting us know how we make you feel and what you love about us. Trust me, the love is returned.

    :toast:
     
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    this is so lovely to read
    a black mans purpose in life is to take care of his seeds
    and give the black woman
    what she needs...

    excellent prose mba...you have outdone yourself with this joint!

    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See I love my black brothers
    your lines took me to a deep feeling
    like heaven's clouds upon the skies
    sweet and meek
    i love my black brothers
    nothing else of you will compare
    the love you have inside
    your dreams our my dreams
    in a divine mix dancing in starz
    my black brother....
    i love you

    thanks hodee love the flow in ^5
    the taste is one of a kind
    love is in the soul as the spirts meet
    a rapture only my black brothers can give

    Peace
    Angel
     
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