Black Poetry : Love I Believe

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love I Believe
    I See You more Clearly
    Like I have Never have Before

    So this is what I Know
    Having You in Me
    Have You upon Me
    I can see what You have in Store.

    Have you ever considered the Passion of being Bitten?
    By the Passions of Love that leaves one Smitten:luv:

    Like the pull of the lunar moon
    The flow and pull is strong

    Like a drug that you didn’t know
    How you took

    No needle in the arm
    It was a Touch,
    A Passing Glance,
    A Chance Meeting, a Word or a Look

    Then the unfolding in all its forms
    Of this Misunderstood Thing

    Begin to unfold
    Makes you Wonder

    How you Ever
    How did they get Here?
    How did it get a Hold?
    On you

    Do they make your Heart Sing?
    Make you Think
    Make you Act
    Make you Confess
    Love makes you Try
    To improve

    Extra attention
    To Details
    Love has a hold on you

    Then the moment comes
    Immediately you have to decide
    If you’re going to ignore the Passion you Feel
    Or take that Ride

    Look into your Heart
    Look into the Eyes
    Of the One
    That has bitten you
    Can you see what’s inside?

    I Gamble and I Know
    When the worm is about to turn
    In my Favor
    Lucky loved by someone with a Yearn

    Were you Bitten?
    Did you Bite?

    You were minding your Business
    Love takes Flight

    You can never know
    Whom love will Strike


    When it happens in an instant
    All at once
    Over Night

    It can be a Shocker
    It can be a Scary Thing

    Thinking Someone has a hold on your Interest
    How did you get into this thing?

    Don’t fight it
    Explore the Corners
    Dive in Unafraid into the Possibilities
    All the Promise
    Of being Bitten
    In Love it can Hold

    All the Facets it has to Offer
    Get Into It let it Unfold

    If it Works Out
    It’s a Lovely Thing

    If it doesn’t take the lesson
    Next time you have New Understanding
    Of the Cold Ways it can End

    Come Together
    Make a Dream

    Your wish will Come True
    Don’t ever be Afraid
    Of Love it Loves You!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll be back to post more on this...but for now I must say, thoroughly...absolutely...beautiful.
     
  3. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Hotep Br. Hodee

    way to capture the idea of love....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you express love from a view many wish to feel this was in depth and well felt
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I was with ya all the way, my brotha, til the last 2 lines!


    Like the Spinners said, "Love Don't Love Nobody."


    But, I do love your view of love.
     
  6. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It takes a fool to learn.. that love ...don't love no one!

    I like that song!

    Thanks for the read cherryblossom

    It isn't love that turns one off
    It is the happenings shared.
    If two people can't get along
    The time has come to part.

    Love is innocent..
    It is twisted...when not worked with properly.
    It has to be acknowledged, accepted, invited and respected.. because emotion and feelings are involved

    Who would want to go thru that again?
    :glasses:
     
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