Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love Hurts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I know the true meaning behind
    The saying, "Love Hurts!"
    And its not in a bad way
    Not because you beat me with your fist
    Or use words to dismiss but because,
    Everyday I spend with you
    Brings me closer to you
    So that when you leave my side
    I feel like I can't eat, breathe or think
    The walls come closing in on me
    And I'm left with my solitude
    Because I don't want to be with anyone else
    Conversations become dull and boring
    Movies aren't the same without you quoting the lines
    I feel like my heart is breaking
    My hands keep shaking
    And all of a sudden my head is pounding
    Remember when I told you I thought I was getting sick
    I'm not its just you that I miss
    I need your smile to push the clouds away
    I need your kisses to let me know everything
    Is gonna be A-Okay
    I need your arms around me to feel the warmth
    And most of all I just need YOU!
    Cause it just gets worse every moment
    Without is cursed
    Now i understand why Love Hurts...



    This is a work in progress, didn't really get everything want to say or how I want to say it but its out, but then again poetry is never really "finished" its an ever evolving process, it grows as you grow. But that's my own philosophy.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is deep and emotonial
    its crazy that it makes you feel this way
    i am still going through my emotions
    nice way to express your feelings poet
    7.5/10
    uno
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    L.O.V.E
    hurts with and without thy mate
    surely works in wayz we may never understand
    something about love......................................
     
  4. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, I see you two brothers understand where I'm coming from. It just hit me a few days ago, love hurts, and it doesn't have to be a bad reason.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: Very nice.. flow. Great philosophy.:spinstar:

    Someone said. " Love hurts so Good! "
     
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    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LIKE THE POINT OF THIS N YOUR INSIGHT ON POETRY BEING UNFINISHED TILL DA PERSON EVOLVES KINDA LIKE LIFE THEN EVEN THAT GOES BACK TO LOVE BEING BOUT LIFE N PERSONAL EVOLUTION GOOD STUFF
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes love is painful often in a joyful way it hurts tenderly ....
     
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