Black Poetry : love him

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  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Purple McKinsee's affirmation for him...
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    as i sat in my seat
    on a plane bond west
    i gazed out the window
    as i watch the plane chase the
    sunset

    i though...at that moment...
    as the cloud hypnotized my
    thoughts...
    "why do you love him"?

    i think that the question
    had been looming in the
    back of my mind...
    leaping forward claiming
    its existence at the moment
    i allowed my mind to relax
    ...and it wondered
    making itself vulnerable to
    be swayed by my strong
    hypnotic suggestion

    i gazed out the window as the
    horizon began to turn
    a sort of gold-orange...
    i tried to shake the thought...
    "why do you love him?"

    it was not a question that
    needed to be answered...
    but, i think my psyche
    got "hoodwinked" by
    "hypnotic" into validating
    surface feeling with my
    heart and soul...

    "i don't know"...
    i answered...but
    i clearly knew...

    he is a man...
    one of character...honesty
    he is loving and it is
    demonstrated...not just verbalized
    he is open to the possibilities
    and closed to the impossible...
    "anything is possible"...
    is the aura encompassing his
    being...

    his being...
    real...
    mature…
    grounded

    yes...i love him

    in his human chocolate form
    a face that highlights his smile
    hands that insure security
    a mind that is independent...
    yet, communal and passionate

    i love me some...him
    and thought i try to escape
    all that he is
    because i feel that i
    cannot have all the goodness this
    beautiful man has to offer...
    i remind myself that
    i can...
    and that is why

    i love him

    MsDLite © 12.01
     
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    LOVE U SOME HIM

    ANSWER THERE WITHIN
    IT'S BEAUTIFUL KNOWING
    AND FEEL THE WARMTH :cool:
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell your love...

    now...
    no perfect time that the
    present...

    what do you have to lose?

    thank for reading...McKinsee
     
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    "i love me some...him"

    THIS IS NICE...i love to hear a woman confess her love for her man...gives me hope that i might one day find a....

    anyway, i loved this serenity portrait.

    THANK YOU.
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smiling...

    at your comments...baller
    i know you will...
    because i will be...
    well, anyway...love unto
    you...poet

    ~rocking chair days~
     
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    MsD,

    nice scribe queen.

    blak
     
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    you bring me

    thoughts that re-surface...this Christmas morning...bringing me scenes that play before my mind's eye like I've been here before, because I've been here before.... thoughts of loving him after making love with him, thoughts at 30 thousand feet high, on a westbound flight... my future behind me, my past before me, wondering how to blend it all into my present...you always speak my heart, MsD...

    I love your imagery...I love your mind. This is peace for my holidays and nights.

    Thank you

    a
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv...

    blak...
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    alyce...
    you speak my heart as well, sis...
    it hit when you said...
    the future behind...the past before...
    i know that all too well...
    thanks for the inspiration!
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    verbage maximus~
     
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    the flight into new...i have taken this many times over and i enjoy the reflection in this piece. The one thing men desire to hear and need as affirmation is the reason why you (ladies) love us so...

    ***seeking to hear those words one day***
     
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