Black Poetry : Love Him

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  1. lilchitownlady

    lilchitownlady Member MEMBER

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    Love Him

    It must be hard for you to go through life spreading bad vibes the way you do
    destroying a mans dreams his hopes his pure raw naked love for you
    How could you strip him of his pride his trust his pure joy of life
    how could you leave him weakened and on his knees
    leaving him crawling in the wretchedness of your deceit
    Why be so callus so wicked so selfish
    It must be hard to act like such a bit¢h

    What’s your philosophy of love hurt him before he hurts you?

    You know you should nurture, and respect a good man.
    Give him strength when he feel he can’t go on
    Stand by his side support and encourage him when things are going wrong
    It must be hard for you to be a black woman and not be strong
    You say you have been hardened by men that have done you in
    How do you think most of them have gotten that way? It’s by this cycle in which you spin

    Love a man with every inch of your being, cherish every soft spoken word he every says or
    writes to you, be his companion, his soul mate his best friend. Learn to stir the fire he feels for you within.
    That’s what I’ve done with the man you’ve hurt, and now
    this sweet wonderful man he has learned to love and be loved again.

    copyright ©2001 LiL Chi-Town Lady
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    chi~town lady

    thank u for seeing men as what we should be
    treated and handled thanks this was sweet
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!!!!!!
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes it is hard for a heart to love and trust again when it has been hurt like this and then discarded...

    the damage some people do in the name of "love"..

    a nice piece...

    k
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely done, dear poetess. keep on scribin'...i'm watchin'.
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BETTER THAN NICE, NEEDED TO BE SAID!

    AMEN SISTA... And when you find a diamond in the
    rough , it is still a diamond sho nuff! LOVE On:love: :love: :love:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how do you mend a broken man?.....

    like this.....


    "love him"....yes


    thank you sis!

    a
     
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