Black Poetry : LOVE & HATE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by black_soul, Dec 8, 2005.

  1. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two strong feelings for one person like yin and yang
    Feelings built inside of me but only I’m to blame
    Cause I love you one moment the next filled with hate
    Wait cause the hate not for you but for situations I create
    Hate the fact you have to guess how I feel
    Love the fact that your so sweet and real
    Its my fault cause of things I haven’t done
    But I can swear and testify to others that you’re the one
    Then I get sidetracked what motivation do I lack that won’t let me say to you
    I want to love you want to be with you be there when your going through
    My mind starts to stop when my hearts ready to go
    So slow
    Is the pace I choose to use so I don’t lose this friend that I found from the start
    Can’t be found in galleries look at this piece, girl you’re a work of art
    I know when god created you he hated to let go to this place
    This angel coming down from heaven singing amazing grace
    So I try to move on finding love with Ms. Wrong
    All the while you doing the same thing girl why are we both singing the same sad song
    My heart doesn’t match the actions of my mind
    Talking to other girls got myself faked out that I’m following the right line
    Lie to myself and say that I’m tired of waiting
    Mean while debating about this love we could be creating
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hearing you poet
    let them know how you feel pham
    yea this is how relationships sometimes go
    make it right
    you know what you want
    you know what you need
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    2 powerful feeling and motivating forces indeed...........

    enjoyed the flow poet!!!
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin this scribe...I can relate as well...Nice piece...

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to blacksoul....

    see baby we were both trying to look for love in otha
    places
    was it that we grown tired of each otha faces

    you was yin
    and i was yang
    cant forget the fact how we do it with a bang

    we know we cant go on this way
    i cant be without you for another day

    daddy i love you cant you see your are the one
    lets forget the bad what's done is done

    we must first put all the bad aside
    you must know im the chick for ya who's down to ride

    because your my sunshine in my life
    will it ever lead us into me becoming your wife

    your name black soul
    mine nevar a beauty to behold

    we are each other Greatest Inspiration
    your my one and only sensation
    a lovely creation

    you too a lovely piece of art
    love you got me in the heart

    lets run away to where our life can begin
    buts let start it out by being friends

    Hey Excuse me Blacksoul
    My name is Nevar.................:spinstar:
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt like u just some thoughts
    right out of my mind and wrote them down.
    I love the honesty of this.
    Good job poet.
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say it's a thin line between love and hate, but I think the problem is that we sometimes hate the way love makes us feel. Feeling this flow poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this poetic drop when deep i feel ya on this one
    keep it coming u speaking it to perfection
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a tight piece...uh oh....ya'll both got skillz....keep doin the **** thang!
     
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    But I can swear and testify to others that you’re the one
    Then I get sidetracked what motivation do I lack that won’t let me say to you

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    This was deep poet
    Much Love-Flow is hott
     
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