Black Poetry : Love - Hate - Death

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  1. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    What am I to do
    at one point I was in Love
    and
    NOw I hate and abhor this fool
    I have tried to avoid him
    for a year and a half
    But this fool
    keeps on coming back.
    The first time he showed up on my lawn
    I thought he was a fool
    The second time he made it to my porch
    because I thought he was in love too
    The third time
    I let him in my bed
    and after wasting my time
    I WISH THIS FOOL WAS DEAD!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep mental thoughts here whewwwwww
    why do folls fall in love as they say heavy write
    express on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once someone enters our lives, a piece of them always remains. Emotively posed poet, I hear you.
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this write its tyte
     
  5. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet!!!

    this is beautiful!! nice write.

    much love.
    plain.
     
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