Black Poetry : Love Gift

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 21, 2007.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She wished to be loved
    Beneath the blue moon
    Kissed to be hugged
    Sexed to a groove

    Love was to be shared
    Care had to be there
    Air said to be rare
    Where trust...
    Lay bare

    A maiden so fair
    Taking sure aim
    There to repair
    Faults in man

    A sensitive tear
    A generous ear
    Clearly dear,

    I'm yours ~



    Darryl Abdu Omari :flowers:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes brethren

    lovely

    mac yours man


    peace
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sweet piece flowed like the breeze, poet.
     
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    1poet:
    This is such a tender and endearing write.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can i use this to tell my girl?? cause this is sweeeeet....you makin these women melt like whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat..agua kid...flows like agua...
     
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