Khasm13 : love from the sun...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    love from the sun
    the place where one plus one
    equals one
    even the klingons phazers
    are always set to stun
    when before i used to run
    from your gentle caresses
    now i bathe in your glowing beauty
    as your love teaches me lessons
    and after you showed your deepness and trueness
    my happiness has given me no other option
    but to persue this
    to the fullest extent of the lavish love
    that you sent
    my once hollow heart resides
    emersed in your galvanizing gravity
    without rent
    warm waves of your radiance
    fills my empty caverns
    you compel me to step to your cadiences
    and i willingly comply
    once wapped fully in your love
    if removed from your arms
    i would surely die
    cause you enchant my eyes
    with wisdom beyond time
    before your love i was blind
    to what is really real
    and how to really feel
    when in love
    when in love
    when in love
    and you showed me
    from above
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot out da waves of water under da sun of loving
    dis was mad tyteeeeeeeeee scribing poet !
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with wisdom beyond time

    Deep...keep scribin poet
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    This is a wonderful piece!! :toast:

    Very moving and deep.

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  5. j'hiah

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    once again, a classic.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    thanks fam...
    i got this from listening
    to the best of norman connors...
    if you don't know about that cat
    then pick up a phat stack...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i will !!!
    continue flowin' poet of da week ..................
     
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    wow..Khasm13 this is so flowing...wonderful poet..loving the vibes i feel from this
    Peace
     
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    Khasm I like your style and your flow...keep writting.
     
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    WOW!.........................................WOW! This was quite pleasing to the mental canvas...and strikingly emotive. Loved this!
     
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