Black Poetry : Love Found Me (Love challenge pt.2)

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I didn't know what it looked like, but it sure knew me.
    I only knew I wanted a love to set me free.
    I didn't know what if felt like , I just knew I wanted to
    feel. It was amazing when it found me I didn't know it
    could be so real. Beyond fantasy phrases and sweet
    repartee, when love found me it just snatched my waiting
    breath away. The day you took me into the place where
    little girls come out the other side as women, when love
    embraced me and fear erased guilt and I let you into my
    heart. Love was waiting round the corner , while I was
    searching for love , like a rainbow you can't always catch
    it but after rainfall you know it's somewhere, raindrops
    do not make me lonely anymore, cuddling and whispers
    is what rainy days are for. When love found me it came
    softly in the form of a friend, laid it's hand on my shoulder
    and simply bid me come in. I was lost til love found me,
    looking throw shadows gray, but your blessed tenderness
    and your compassion , makes me feel sunshine everyday!

    Bjs(C)2003
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful!!!!!
     
  3. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece but the read was a lil choppy for me

    nice job though

    i'm feelin it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love comes in ways unheard of
    yet u can feel love even taste it
    beautiful vibe
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LPoet just getting warmed up dahling!

    Trust I enjoy the gentle prose of love poetry, I am just stretchin and reachin, not there yet...I will come with something real sweet when the challenge we complete..


    Blessings on Ya House!
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one
     
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