Black Poetry : Love Forever

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE FOREVER

    Laws coupled with imperfection flaws double no protection
    Claws verse makes correction paws like tiger but show affection
    Cute with a smile but in absolute denial
    Fruit of the Nile salute as facts compile recruits got me on trial
    Stoop to an abrupt literary style arbitrary in thought got me wild
    Fine secretary wow juvenile like Mariah Carey and Destiny Child
    Red lips wear mini-dress hips round plenty breasts
    Sexual infinity got me in stress obscenity seem to bless
    Cutie got me suspicious because she’s booty licious
    Duty calls for a Superstitious kiss loopy and expeditious
    Brown sweaty thighs down and ready to lick the pies
    Crown you as love flies bound you as my erect body cries
    Let me explain she’s wet not a plain Jane I can only aim
    Unrestrained in her sexual sophistication // textual interpretation not slang
    She tower above rest and shower my love bless with rain
    Smash my car Stacey Dash flashed some tits and *** left me clueless
    My tires on the highway glueless so yall true this my crew piss
    Body itch coming from a party ran my car into a ditch

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. DeJay

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    i fill ya

    im start lovin forever now:love:
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    what goes around comes around..

    don't judge me and i won't judge you

    based on the lyrical content of this here poem


    *clearing my throat* LOL

    WE STILL COOL

    and this piece is tight

    pd
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

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    MADD FOREVER

    you've done it once again

    yes son
     
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    MADD!!!

    I see you still posess the illest flow...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    LOL @ PoeticDelight :lol:

    did i miss sump'n ???

    rite here witcha MADD
    keep flow'n Bruh Man

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. KentuckianKween

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    "Smash my car Stacey Dash flashed some tits and *** left me clueless ..."


    catchy :) i thought this piece was very well crafted... *thumbz up* fabaliss!!


    keep shinin...
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DeJay THANKS FOR FEELING THIS GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS i TRY TO MAKE EM ENJOYABLE FOR REAL AGAIN THANKS FOR RESPONDING




    poeticdelight GIRL A MAN CAN'T HELP BUT JUDGE THE FUDGE OF THE BROWN ROUND HIPS THANKS FOR RESPONDING LOVING IT



    Da Street So'ja HOPE TO KEEP DOING IT THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL




    Reason THANKS FOR PEEPING AND RESPONDING TO THIS MEANS A LOTS FOR REAL



    Destee GLADY YOU'RE HERE WITH ME WELL I CAN'T LOSE THEN LOL FOR REAL GIRL SLAM THIS MAMMA JAMMA IN ALABAMA GIRL THANKS FOR RESPONDING






    KentuckianKween THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL EVEN A COUNTRY IS JUST FINE IN DESTEE LOL YO I TRIED MY DAMNEST NOT TO SMASH THE CAR FOR REAL THANKS FOR RESPONDING DOE LOL
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD

    sometymes you gotta do what you gotta do
     
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    Been a while!

    Been a while since I've read you on the pages--I liked this piece--good rhythm and great subject--Amun-Ra :cool:
     
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