Black Poetry : Love For A Brotha

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweetbrownsugar, Aug 10, 2004.

  1. sweetbrownsugar

    sweetbrownsugar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 28, 2004
    Messages:
    158
    Likes Received:
    5
    Ratings:
    +5
    From Nappy dreads to Sexy bald heads.
    Your hint of diamond smile
    Lips that seem to kiss for miles
    Heavenly sculpted physiques
    Skin in hues of brown so unique
    Eyes that hide pain, but CAPTIVATE
    Brotha, sweet is the love you make!
    So unlike the red, yellow or white man
    They imitate, can't relate or seem to understand...you
    are a KING life gives no throne
    Life breaks you down, but you remain STRONG!
    A beautiful people you have fathered
    Your existence essential like Heaven's air and Earth's water
    My Beautiful, Black, Love, Friend, King and BROTHA
    I tell you this day there is NO OTHER
    Who can do the things like you do
    You are beautiful....and I LOVE YOU.
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 5, 2004
    Messages:
    905
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    administrative
    Location:
    Bowie
    Ratings:
    +9
    Sista, this was short and sweet. Tight flow. :coffee:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    love this one speak on brothers listening
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2002
    Messages:
    3,299
    Likes Received:
    182
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Economist
    Location:
    Detroit, MI
    Home Page:
    Ratings:
    +236
    Sweetbrownsugar

    You gets mad love for this piece.

    And believe me, Sweet Sista, we love you black. :kiss: :grouphug:

    :thanks: for sharing your feelings about us brothas.

    :toast:
     
  5. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 23, 2004
    Messages:
    42
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    This piece is sweet like sweet potato pie. It makes a brotha feel loved. Thank You.
     
  6. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 11, 2003
    Messages:
    383
    Likes Received:
    2
    Ratings:
    +2
    Reply to SweetBrownSugar

    Sweetbrownsugar, sweeps her brother man off feet into cloud
    Your words worship worthily, they become your lover’s shroud
    Sweet words swoop him up, cause him, your lover to swoon
    He falls into your heavenly cloud, and slurps your love from a spoon

    Sweetbrownsugar, Seize the Day!
    Great poem you have made!

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  7. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 23, 2004
    Messages:
    113
    Likes Received:
    4
    Ratings:
    +4
    just beautiful
     
  8. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 30, 2004
    Messages:
    374
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    Stress Management Therapist
    Location:
    Akasha
    Ratings:
    +9
    as a concious Black Afrikan Amerikan Brotha

    I LOVED THIS POEM!

    And I love :love: you for writing it... :toast:
     
  9. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 24, 2004
    Messages:
    59
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    GIRL YOU KNOW YOU ARE SOOO RIGHT, NONE LIKE THEM. TIGHT FLOW. MUCH LOVE.PEACE.

    POETIC_DIVA

    "I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST, WHICH STRENGHTHENS ME" PHILP 4:13
    :love: :love: :love: :love: :wink: :wink: :fairy: :fairy: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: ;) ;) ;)
     
  10. MrBlak

    MrBlak Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 18, 2004
    Messages:
    518
    Likes Received:
    9
    Ratings:
    +9
    WOW....this poem blew me away. Thanks for posting this excellent piece of work!!
     
Loading...