Black Poetry : Love Flows

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jan 21, 2007.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You make love to me
    You make me forget the pain

    You make love to me
    You knock me off my feet

    You know how to make love to me
    I forget what I had to say

    It is strong enough to pick me up
    like it can put me down
    or used to hide deceit.

    So I haven't made love to you
    so I could clear up any doubt
    I needed space even forsake tasting your sweet touch
    I had to evaluate just what was going on
    To me you mean so much
    I found all above in the wonderous love
    I am weak and think of all the time
    I'm coming back for another dose

    To see what else I can find.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can find whatever you heart desire
    The fire

    We created man couldn't touch
    We didnt need much

    Just a simple touch or a glance
    Every time we make love its like a slow dance

    Make love to me
    Make love to me
    Make love to me


    As I look into your eyes
    I feel the strong hands of yours upon my thigh
    making love to you gives me an ultimate high

    Its my turn to take your hand
    Its my turn to show you the promise land
    Hodee my man

    Make sweet love to me
    Make erotic love to me
    Make tasty love to me
    I can't stop the way I feel

    When your making love to me!!!!!​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully done and look at sista Nevar whewwwww!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some things are so joyful you just have to pinch yourself so to speak to see if it's real. Your pen is on fire Hodee. Sensual flow back from nevar.
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is like an incubus of stupidity
    blinded by our dreams.

    Just a little Haiku for you....

    Keep doing ya thing fam

    Mannie
    www.myspace.com/defiantson
     
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