Black Poetry : Love Eternal (from A Tarheel Poet's master series)

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waves of fulfillment crashing,
    internally consumed,
    creating various summations of elation
    that shift like phases of the moon,
    breathtaking, ground shaking,
    breaking the boundaries of restriction,
    my conviction: that we have superbly assumed
    a next level, soul enlightening
    life-altering type of thing
    that’s set off seismic vibrations within me
    from all the
    joy/elation/passion/desire/adoration/
    thirsts quenched as you light my fires/satisfaction/attraction/
    security/trust/a sense of pure bliss when thinking of us


    magnetically,
    we’re together drawn
    into the dawning light of our blazing forever,
    a sun, beaming, like your eyes,
    has me dreaming
    about you and me, growing old,
    and what our future holds,
    because separating me from you
    would be like removing oxygen from the lungs,
    I’d get constricted, walls closing in,
    gasping, breathless,
    fighting….for what I need to stay alive

    transcending time,
    our love, eternal,
    God forbid our paths verge apart,
    know, internally, you’d always be a part
    of the things I’ve loved more than life themselves,
    because you’ve claimed the rights to my heart
    so at the end, if you’re not by my side,
    my mind will constantly relocate back
    to our truly extraordinary time,
    where we set ourselves out on love’s ledge,
    knowing full well, if we stepped off the edge,
    the other’s arms would engulf us,
    keeping us safe from harm…
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I truly enjoyed this....
    Beautiful peace.


    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dat's tyght scribing love dis one.....
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful testimony of love and togetherness...i think that ima go n read it again...
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the replies....I appreciate the love shown...know that it's returned full circle.

    MJ
     
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    Very nice Poet...

    Thanx for sharing.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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