Black Poetry : Love equals you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Feb 9, 2003.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when I think
    about your love
    and what it means to me
    I don't think about
    candles and wine
    and red red roses
    or chocolate covered
    pieces of candy~
    I think about times
    like the way
    you touch me
    when I cry
    or the way your
    body feels
    when I lie next to you
    or the way
    you used to rub my back
    when it ached
    from the weight
    of your unborn child~
    or the way you tell
    me I'm still
    the most beautiful woman
    in the world
    and I'm your girl
    and always will be~
    it thrills me
    to hear you talk like that
    to know that
    no matter what I do
    I'll still be loved by you~
    and when I want
    to define real love
    I find myself
    thinking of all the little
    simple things
    that have meaning
    in my life~
    and no matter how many
    times I do
    the math
    they all add up to you

    (c) nfn
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alright u go gurl !!!!
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice Kitana,

    "and no matter how many
    times I do
    the math
    they all add up to you"

    beautiful words...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    !

    This is really nice , great flow, would be great spoken piece, too. really great lines.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    "and no matter how many
    times I do
    the math
    they all add up to you"


    this includes new math too......absolutely beautiful and an Instant Klassik for real




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