Black Poetry : love eclipse.........not finished

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ballerSon, Nov 23, 2011.

  1. ballerSon

    ballerSon Member MEMBER

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    today is the day i been waitin for our first time together
    intertwind entagled in love
    everything about this is perfect like the releasing of the doves

    now enter the door move slowly
    listen hear the music begin to feel it in your soul running through your veins
    close your eyes hear me baby feel me creepin up from behind
    embrasing ur body becoming 1 liftin off the ground
    our wings emersed in the soils of our heated passion as i enter ur golden gates.
    U look up
    You c the sun, moon, and stars drifting in the mist
    as ur near ur limits we start to slow our ascention
    a star explodes as u climax.
    we fall with the star as u make a wish on the star.
    Hoping that the feeling neva ends
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well scripted love the flow of this joint
    welcome to da poetic playground ballerSon
     
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    ballerSon lovely wording... i'm embracing the beauty of what you've created. Thank you for such a lovely read.
     
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    Brother Poet Ballerson,

    Sensual. Love how the subject uses images of nature to express his passion and love. Enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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