Black Poetry : Love Came Down

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  1. B'NIA S. NYKABI

    B'NIA S. NYKABI Member MEMBER

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    I was gonna tell GOD about you
    Until I realized...it wasn't necessary to
    After all~it was HE whom sent me to you
    I was gonna inform HIM of my love for you
    But..since HE placed it there...there was no need to
    I wanted to talk to HIM about how wonderful it was
    To be loved by you..how great it was making love to you..and
    It was at this point..that I started to cry
    Knowing that GOD knows that I can't come to HIM

    With such an embarrasing lie..that plus..truth be told
    As much as I want it...want you....there is nothing
    I can do you see~to change your heart
    And MAKE you want me!


    Reality...of this nature is akin to an addictive drug
    Which most often..during times like this
    One wishes to sincerely avoid
    Especially since unrequited affection can make one
    Feel null and void...somewhat..emotionally destroyed
    It appeared..at this moment in time
    Nothing short of the truth would do
    And...what good could come about from ME telling HIM
    Something that HE already knows..and thereby
    When I did so...and HE told me to move on
    I knew at that point...I would soon be gone
    A past tense portion of your life
    But...taking it to HIM..ended my trivial emotional strife
    So....happy birthday..and so long..as
    Beyond a shadow of a doubt..moving on
    Is what I am now all about
    Looking forward to seeing a smile on MY face
    Instead of a frown...the next time
    I go to tell HIM....that LOVE CAME DOWN!!!!!

    B'NIA S'DAO NYKABI
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  2. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was the bomb. i have been there.... i really feel that. thanks for sharing that with us. (and i ain't trying to be corny or nothing.. just real)
    good to meet you.

    peace and blessings

    d
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to da playground of Destee's place
    welcome within upon family & friendz
    welcome to da flowz as i watch ya poetic showz
    welcome from above da $$RICHNE$$ send luv
    welcome!:) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. ladye

    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    is that ever so true. i'm just getting over mines. nice poem and welcome
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i absolutely loved this! welcome to destee
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very good read, and more inspiring than you know....thanks for that one...keep 'em coming!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving your work dear scribe!

    Love lost and found, unrequited or dropped on the ground this is the stuff of poetic legends and you are making your place on this Destee zone and you my friend are welcomed HOME!

    Blessings on Ya house!:D
     
  8. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome
    Very nice poem
    Keep churning them out........
     
  9. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word! i see you're having no trouble fittin' in the grove here. great piece, i think that a lot of us have truly been there before. welcome and keep posting...
     
  10. PloeMorphic

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    I can relate. That was hot.
     
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