Black Poetry : Love Bestowed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Oct 31, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's hard to express how i feel about you
    our relationship is confusing, exciting and although not new
    it is so comfortable and real
    and now unattached, there is nothing to conceal
    you were always there for me
    to split a spliff
    smokin in our park
    me waiting to go home until after dark
    and then you disappeared
    lost my confidant, what i feared
    and 6 years later, too weird
    you, out of nowhere reappeared
    and last night when you took my hand
    sent electric volts of heat across my lands
    i looked into your eyes and you seemed to understand
    i am not trying you for sport
    you have always meant too much to me to resort
    to saying we will always be friends
    until the day that this new thing we begin ends
    and, then you kissed me, so soft and lingering
    my hair twisted gently in your hands fingering
    and we kissed the same and I was so nervous
    wondering if this move was going to do our friendship a disservice
    but after being surrounded by people who don't really care
    maybe this is right, had the Lord finally answered my prayer
    if you want it set it free
    something brought you back to me
    and while my body dripped in anticipation
    i said goodbye offering no further invitation
    if you were anyone else,
    as long as its been (speaking for myself)
    there would have been no hesitation
    would've let you hit it a time or two
    (you're right, your kiss had the power of very other few)
    but with you there is so much more I want to do
    and share and be, let you know I've been there
    and that I am now prepared
    holding on to things you casually left behind
    unknowingly knowing in the back of my mind
    someday you would be searching to find
    things you left so long ago
    so, upon you, i return me bestowed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes

    love returned ....this was very nicely pose'd
    tyte keep flowin
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gotta let my heart keep going. thanks as always $$rich$$. I have missed you deeply.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let ya heart move in the way u feel as it journey
    yes missed u too happy to be home ! :toast:
     
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    beautiful scribe
    lovely
    Peace
     
  6. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater -

    Thanks for listening, hopingthis oneis real, sad i keep looking, right?
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wondering if some may have missed this, looking for feedback please
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely done and done well put well no words no sounds no reasons for nothing distasteful. your words are wise although some folks love is wasteful..........keep it flowin
     
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    you know I did miss this one somehow, Randee. it is incredibly tight - great flow. maybe more importantly, it represents your journey so well. I am so impressed with you.
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ladies, waiting for responses from those I admire, you'd be them.
     
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