Black Poetry : Love & Basketaball (The Moment)

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The moment
    I came in the door
    Feeding me nectar and berries
    Im loving you so
    Food already cooked
    Did I walk throught the right door
    Im in the wrong house
    Should've went to the left door
    Yet the vision was real
    The moment
    You entered my life
    Glass slippers no pumpkins
    My Black Cinderella
    She is gorgeous
    Yes she is something
    In too basketball/Her favorite player
    Tracy Mcgrady-We go back and fourth
    Cause mine is Dwayne Wade
    Yet thats love
    Love in more words
    Than can be imagined
    The moment
    I look into her eyes
    I knew I had to have her
    Love burns inside
    Like fires turn the hands of time
    We do this all night
    Me kissing you
    Holding you in my arms
    We falling asleep together
    The miami heat &
    houston rockets still playing
    I yawn and open my eyes
    In the third quarter
    The heat up by 10
    Cant wake her she my get mad
    Cause my team whooping
    Her teams asz
    But I just laugh
    (PAUSE)
    Couple hours past
    Then we wake up together
    She hops in the shower
    I turn on sportscenter
    They havent talked about the game yet
    So im cooking breakfast in the kitchen
    She comes out the shower
    Hey baby listen
    Mcgrady had 25points 7rebounds 5assist
    Wade had 26points 5rebounds 3assist
    The final score was
    Rockets 110 & The Heat 106
    Aint this a bitcch
    The Moments we Love Basketball

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like sharing moments
    in the depth of a game both so love
    it's love n' basketball

    i really enjoyed reading this piece poet !
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the love
    Brother $$RICH$$
    I do appreciate it
    Love & Basketball
    I really liked that movie
    My favorite is still Loves Jones
     
  4. cursed heart

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    This had romance,the warmth of sharing interest, and love!
    Beautiful Tantrum:blowkiss:
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister Cursed
    I thank you for the support
    Its a beautiful thing
    When you can find a woman
    That can relate to you on so many
    Different levels for real
     
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    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    See


    I knew you had it in you
     
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    Tantrum... you know I enjoyed this read.... wow!!!!
     
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    I'm feelin this here...... got me daydreamin. Tight Flow

    AM
     
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    flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    This piece was both fun to read and heart warming at the same time. Loved it!
     
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