Black Poetry : love at first sight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tzevi1278, Dec 13, 2004.

  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the moment I saw you, it’s like we were connected.
    But I fought the feeling for years, I constantly rejected it.
    You know how it be, even if there’s chemistry
    our squads vibed separately, so you know we’d never be.
    Theoretically the mixing of a pedigree was considered uncool.
    Never a written rule, but you knew it held true.
    The jocks was my crew and you ran with the intellectuals.
    Perpetually infecting me with your way of speech,
    but it never really reached cause young ****** ain’t checkin’ for anything teached.
    I spoke that knucklehead ****, while you always spoke with substance,
    anything relating to school, I snubbed the subject.
    Trying to budge the mind of a fool, you were reluctant
    but within the depths of my soul, I felt this love flourish.
    Completely taking in by the thought of unknown explorations,
    didn’t really know how it would go, but I had my own expectations.
    I’ve always had a thirst for the truth, so I condoned explanations,
    so I took you home because I ran out of patience.
    Now I’m all excited by the thought of taboo,
    snuck you in my room so I could see what you do.
    Then I slowly opened you and ran my fingers over your incomprehensible body,
    I know it sounds strange but that’s how I did it when I started.
    So while I already had you parted, I started to penetrate your essence,
    dove deeper and deeper until I could identify your message.
    It’s like you were singing to me without making a sound,
    once I pick you up it’s like I couldn’t put you down.
    You became a part of me, but I kept you around secretly,
    we came together intimately, but enjoyed each other equally.
    My second life became a mystery as I shunned my former friend,
    Our love grew stronger daily, so no longer could I pretend.
    I gathered some strength from within, and proceeded to make my plea,
    “I’m in love with poetry, and I’m no longer afraid to be”


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    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said poet flow on da feeling become likewise .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing enjoyed this read.....flow head on

    Angel
     
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    1Greaterthan~I Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're on to something, I like your work :welldone:
     
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    attention attention :picture:


    for this poet here.....


    :hi: welcome to destee...



    this was verry nice :congrats: i loved the way you kept it exited as if you were speaking about youre first love at first site...
    you should post this to...

    at the BISHOP topic ...how you would describe Poetry if it was a person you met like a woman or man...


    bring us more poet ..
    i enjoyed the read...




    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    Poetry, like a first love that just keeps a hold on our minds. I know what you mean poet, loved the flow.
     
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    good brother

    You are definitely one of the true blue brothers who know how to speak to a lady and make her feel like she is the only one in your world. I like your flow.
     
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