Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jan 30, 2002.
very strong piece...
boy you hitting hard like only you can do.....I like this one...
I like this part...
"Sex is just a bandaid on a broken limb..."
Says a lot!!!
I was wonderin where u had been hidin.
Glad to read ya!
I'm feeling this piece. Sometimes you have to put the big BOOT down. Anotha badd creation
Poetically Turn'd Out!
this peace here is
S l a m m i n!!!!!!!!
...glad it ain' t ME...
I'm feel'in what u sayin!
Tyte scribe poet!
well dayummmm! so'ja
I see u had to break it down
da street fighting style of a hard
note ......yeap it's like dat som'times
do ya thisal bru.....slam dunk!
It's like a storm up in hea!!!
Man, I'm startled loved this, right down to the last sentence. Man, If this isn't the way so many people feel... I'm bout to write a song. Cuts like a knife. Feelin ya bro.
Dawg, this is kickin' mos' def!!!
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