Black Poetry : Love and Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Aug 16, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

    You've stuck by me through the thickest of thick

    Time captured in a bottle to preserve love's union

    Clinging to my potential to love you unconditionally

    You've monitored every beat of my heart; ensuring
    living for you through us carries the day

    The smallest of all things are those you've always
    said matters; I've come to know just what you
    meant in that delightful regard

    Giving consequence to your life gives a reason for my
    passion; fueled and driven with a single kiss

    My purpose for existence is borne of you and of
    time; bonding us perpetually into close eternity

    Personifications of what my dreams are made of;
    euphemistic synergies of personal selves

    Complete thoughts transform abstract imitations
    of cupidity on occasion into manifestations of
    real love co-mingled with time

    Initiator of the torch that lights my soul from within

    Guardian of the flame that burns deeply within me

    Love grew with time; but I love you then as I do now

    But on a much more profound level; this I feel true

    Two-dimensional paradigms of peace brought to
    bear by your warmth, your sincerity, and of course,
    your smile

    Touch me casually as I hold you carefully; never
    wanting to free my grasp of your love oh so pure

    Spoil me tenderly but with reckless abandon; and
    in turn explore my intent to honor you on our love
    journey to infinity

    Love me as if your life depended on it; habitually
    my lifeline pulsates as I slip into a dreamscape
    world resuscitated by you and endless time

    Like heart is to soul and spirit is to mind

    You are forever my love

    Until the end of time...

    :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
     
  2. keri

    keri Active Member MEMBER

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    talking to myself...how sweet is this
    replying.....very sweet
    am I crazy, no just appreciative of good scribing!
    K.
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Q....Beautiful.

    BE
     
  4. Afridancr

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    you've got me feelin

    all emotional and stuff! I can only imagine what it'd be like...

    this is :love:
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    *thinking of ginuwine's new single*

    this was sweet and beautiful all in one
    passage

    good work!


    pd
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i'm jealous and i don't even know her

    wow GQ ... just make us all fall in love with you !!!

    :love:

    Destee
     
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    um um um

    gives me goose bumps just thanking bout love like this heah! :)
    woooooo, ya'll poets can say that sHtuff!


    a
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que....


    i ain't sayin' nothin'... i'm just gon keep on inhalin'
    from this here oxygen tank. :wink:

    but before i go... let me tell you that this is somma
    dat PureLove. & she be Luckier than a mofo! :)

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GQ

    you laced this, was it written for someone special?
    you took love to a new level

    DSSNY
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nah So'Ja....my love scribes be for "she in waiting".....feel me?

    All - thanks for the read!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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