Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOVE: AN OPEN DOOR

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by godsmantru, Apr 14, 2008.

  1. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    Watching, watching, calling,
    Dropping, dropping, stalling,
    Do I dare see whos at the door?
    Kneeling, kneeling healing,
    Rejecting, hurtful, feelings,
    Can I say my love for you is evermore?
    Fearing, fearing, steering,
    My heart, my heart, is hearing,
    The evil that was planted at the core:
    Wake up, wake up, instructing,
    Reality, soon, destructing,
    The night that I once Knew you on the shore:
    Once more, my heart, is open,
    Unto, the words, that spoken:
    If all you have is fear then I implore!
    Shut the Door.
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    no room for fear....

    like the way you finished...
     
  3. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    THANK YOU, AND PEACE MISS LADY
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was awesome and braveheart
     
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