Black Poetry : "Love act"

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  1. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The doors close as you bring in your tray. I rock back and forth and sway. I feel the silk ropes and remember we are doing your fantasy today.

    I am prong and heading head long,into what is going on,into my lovers mind.

    The ropes. "Ah the ropes don't bind. I could easily break them,but i do not mind,because they don't confine and i am just fine.

    She descends and i want to grab and put myself in,but i regain control. I must let her direct how things are going to unfold.

    With a start. She puts on the blindfold and puts my eyes in the dark.

    I let my mind flow and our bodies go,to where we don't know. The moans escapes her beautious lips,as i release myself and get a sip. I grab her sexy hips and give her more loving bliss.

    I take her where she wants to go and don't miss. I stroke her arms and she pins my wrists,and we know. We will always remember this.


    She loosens up and slowly unwinds,but this is and won't be about someone getting mine. We go up the rollcoaster again to pleasure divine.

    "Okay! She says." Laying there panting and beautiful on the bed. "How can you continue on." "Ggurl please! with you the love is never gone,and i'm always willing to be a fulfilling so baby come on."

    When you make that bread with your hands. I know right there i'm going to be your staying,steady lover man.

    When you make that squeal,and make me do the right deal. "Yeah i know right there and then, that i'm going to love you Beautiful Black womanwith zeal and all that sex appeal.

    I promise you no less than three times orgasmic with your loving eyes looking around,and i will keep trying to keep that face a smile and never a frown.
    Remember this with you my love knows no bounds.

    Hold fast as i sweetly discreetly wax and love that sweet Black ladies,,,
     
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    Hi ya robboy,
    Welcome to Our circle of together-ness...
    Please make yourself at home, because you are.
    I love the love scene, we don't need the :deal: writting on the wall to see the love you have for your "Other half" ...what a beautiful thing. Thanks for sharing your side of the world...
    Do enjoy your stay.
     
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    I feel the good vibe queentswana. May you walk in the shining light and stay Blessed Sista!
     
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    Hello robboy:
    Just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed
    your piece. I look forward to reading more of you.

    Much Luv
     
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    Thank you young sista! I am an will always be in love,and hopefully you are and will be Blessed in that as well.

    Love her constantly,consistently, and with concern.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely a smooth scribe filled in warmth
    no need to change anything ...very nice and welcome within
     
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    man oh man i love this hot piece of yours. its almost like i was their. i like it when i can get a visual. very, very tasty this was. flo on poet!:terrific:
     
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    I'll let my poetry speak on how i feel. "Sometimes the pen is hot to the touch. I luv you all caring at destee very,very much!:kiss2:


    Thanks, Ladies and guys!
     
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    most welcome the love is likewise robboy
     
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    robboy2003

    Nice piece, bruh. I may be wrong but I since your youth in this piece.

    Nice flow...a well-written tender moment. But, I think you're holding back.... Tell da Fam how you REALLY feel. :nuts:

    4EVERLUV: I'm loving that avatar. :D
     
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