Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOVE 3--He put his lips on my....

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  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He put his lips on my....name
    And i haven't been the same
    Stroked my imagination with his eyes
    I spread my wings...I can fly!!

    When he put his lips on my...name
    I changed
    He exhales my drug...
    (his metamorphasized carbon dioxide his air)
    I'm a feen...i don't care

    Cause he put his lips on my...name
    His mouth curls up into that smile...my sunshine
    Repositioning my body on his...mind
    Having thoughts of every kind

    When he put his lips on my...name
    He used his tongue to touch my...thoughts
    My dreams have been caught
    And he tasted my...love
    (I'm currently taking flight lessons from a dove)

    He put his lips on my...name
    And I don't have no shame
    He rubs on my...passion
    Feels on my...affection

    Did I tell you, he put his lips on my...name
    And I changed
    Now I crave his presence
    When we're together, I ride on his essence

    He put his lips on my...name
    I haven't been the same since
    When are apart
    I feel his tugging on my heart

    He put his lips on my...name
    And I've been different every since
    It's beginning to make sense
    I'm in love...

    (What do you think?) :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes u r in love as he put his lips on ur name
    nice flow /well scribed
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Downright spiritual...

    I like this!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    lovin it. he put his lips on your.......name. very classy
     
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    That was gangsta. It was real hot!!!!
     
  6. ShayShay

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    NDeep

    Its gotta be love, I feel you on that note
    Very well written

    Hold on to your love
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderfully expressed very beautiful poem indeed until next time peace and blessins keep flowin
     
  8. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys...
     
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    yeah girl u r in ................. love
    a beautiful place to be
     
  10. triniti424

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    it sounds like real love, and I'm happy U could share ya blessin wit us. :) Many people live a lifetime never knowing true love :)
     
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