Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lot

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Mar 28, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Folks don't understand the reverse
    The story has been played out
    Now everyone has their own verses
    Not realizing a whole lot is under your single clott
    The lot has been purposely split to present diversity
    When no one wants to join hands in the water to float
    We begin to review our once buyers in reverse as our life boats
    If ya can't make it with your own on the lot of chastity
    Portray your adverse and your strength will help us feel better that you have went in
    Reverse speeding out your hooded lot
    Our boats name will save your mind made up of
    No choices.
     

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    Love the messaging here, Sis. Nicely done.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great read sis
     
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    I'm glad yall feelin me!:)