Black Poetry : Lost

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Reachin out against da windz
    my soul loops a lingering cry
    as thy heart calls out unto thee
    my love is a stain upon da mirror
    i see da images of my morrow
    stand before me is a shadow
    for i know not one's face
    if she only knew me then light
    would brighten our love's future
    come closer dear.
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    "here i come $RICH$"
    I'm glad to feel your words of chilvery:)
     
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    as you move closer, clarity of vision will open you to a deeper purpose...

    continue your journey, my friend.
     
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    This way candee 2 your left forth i be my dearest
     
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    My brother the journey is long hard and deep but my feet keep moving forward to it's true purpose thankz
     
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    candles brighten my room
    as i look in the mirror
    i am held in the image
    of my love's perfect shadow

    all warm inside, my eyes softly close
    as tears of joy begin
    to gently flow because i know
    it is my face he clearly sees
    and it is my heart he feels

    nothing will ever come between us
    not even the light from the stars
    for what we have is true
    as it has been written
     
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    My precious Poet Brother $$RICH$$,

    Beautifully written! Yes.

    (smile)
     
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    Thankz , I love the piece as well
     
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