Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOST

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Jun 23, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why darkness is there no light
    which can break through
    Thats the way I feel when I turnover each morning
    and I view you
    Are you trapped in a mediocre transition which allows
    you not to inspire
    Or do you search each day in a desperate state aiming
    at obscene ambition that will bring fire

    Your mouth can say "I LOVE YOU" but your pores spew
    hate
    After a long, long look I can't believe I chose you as my
    pitiful mate
    Your physiqe and your smiles are fine to eyes as far
    as they can see
    Yet my eyes have focused for years and years and I
    know you do not belong to me

    Promise after promise all broken one by one
    Your lies make my heart so heavy it seems as though
    it weighs a ton
    A zombie state is where I suffer when I am with you
    A peaceful end to this deadly duo is so long overdue

    Have I lost desire for all things good including my
    old friend love
    Oh I want so badly to fly and soar like the solemn
    wings of a dove
    But my life has meaning my life has purpose and
    on that great day I will wait
    Because Jehovah has a lining around this dark cloud
    that will surely seal my fate

    written by Sweettee29
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed surely will .......felt all this flow and been on this path.
     
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    wow sweetee29 can so so relate to this flo on sis.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GRACIAS GRACIAS FOR YOUR WORDS MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    dito........as i continue to feel the depth of ya pen
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I TRY TO REACH THE DEPTHS OF YOUR SOUL
    WITH LIFES TRUE PHASES SURELY WITH MORE TO UNFOLD


    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I TRY TO REACH THE DEPTHS OF YOUR SOUL
    WITH LIFES TRUE PHASES SURELY WITH MORE TO UNFOLD


    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    In too Deep that is , feeling it all
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEEPNESS IS A FEELING THAT SHAKES YOUR SOUL
    I WILL KEEP THE RHYMES COMING AND LET TIME TAKE ITS TOLL

    SWEETTEE29 LOVE
     
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