Black Poetry : Lost

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  1. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I look to the sky with desperate eyes,
    wondering, “ Can no one save me?”
    For I am lost upon a sea of dreams,
    the constant thought of you plagues me.
    So hard I’ve tried to erase that memory,
    wipe away the never-ending tears.
    Too many times I wondered if it was too late.
    If I couldn’t take back, all those wasted years.
    Sometimes I ask, “ Did fate lead me along?”
    Left me dragging, so empty and cold?
    When all I had; this love I was dying to give.
    To be turned away, all my love for you spent.
    How I gave my all to my one life’s joy.
    When all I wanted was for you to end my ceaseless call.
    For you to lay to rest those empty myths.
    That real true love did not exist.
    To prove to the world, on through the stars above.
    That I have found him, you are the one I love.
    Instead, you made my love a knife; stabbed me in the back with it.
    Took my calling and made it a noose
    to hang up my dreams, for my plea of love was refused.
    And oh the darkness! The eternal darkness that now lies thick.
    Thick upon my beacon of light.
    How I’ve become so weary of this earth’s love fight.
    No longer can I stand the pain, no longer can I stand the torture.
    No longer will I seek the love that I so painstakingly sought after.
    No there is no more. No more feelings left to feel.
    An empty shell I have now become.
    To the feelings of loss I have now succumbed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done ....lost in the maze
     
  3. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the choice of words, nicely done! I look forward to more from you

    ----MzPoetic

    "Destiny is not a matter of chance, It is a matter of choice. It is not a thing to sit around and be waited for; it is a thing to be acheived"
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost love can leave one with a bewildered feeling. Thank goodness there is a chance in life to love again. Feeling this here.
     
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