Black Poetry : lost

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dupe, May 30, 2005.

  1. Dupe

    Dupe Active Member MEMBER

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    Disfunctional,
    psychologically ****** up without you
    you hypnotise my mind with your eyes
    as we stare and get lost in each other
    i uncover that i must be dreaming
    because it's seeming to be a fairy tale
    my heaven on earth
    i thank god for blessing your mother with your birth
    i am determined to stick by your side
    no matter what may arise
    a part of the center piece of my world
    in which we are blessed by a little girl

    I love you my young poet.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful words, Dupe!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece put a smile on my face poet, very endearing flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling every line here , nicely done and said Dupe
     
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