Black Poetry : LOST

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have lost
    I have lost a million things over time
    but nothing like this, I am unraveling
    I lay awake alone at night
    questioning what is was I didn't do right
    I have lost time and pure thoughts
    I have lost all of our foughts
    over this child
    and now you want to comfort me
    where were you when our child still be in my belly?
    No matter what they say
    i will neva forget feelin this way
    He tells me I am being selfish
    when the 3am phone calls I abolish
    I have lost him and I don't care
    selfish or not I really don't think its fair
    that he can go on with his life
    as I were not maimed carrying this strife
    as if I have not lost what i dreamed would be
    sometimes I imagined us a happy family
    crazy, I know, and unrealistic
    but in this situation no sense being pessimistic
    Reality check and I knew
    alone I would be as our child grew
    and I would smile and think of our son or daughter
     
  2. MORE

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    mannn this made me hear violins and things this was tight, yessss, i feel you.:wave: :wave:
     
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    yeah, this was so deep. and so real, i could just see your pain through your words. may you find healing.
     
  4. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through the pen
     
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    wow my sista u never fail to gove emotion its true colors...stay strong baby gurl...dat baby gon have a mother who is blessed and wiser and spiritually beautiful :)
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the words, I miscarried a week ago. Not in the mood to write much lately, but I know the words will flow when the hurt stops. Love you all.
     
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    Randee...I wasn't aware.........always love your writing
    just thought I'd let u know, my prayers are with you..., truly.
     
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    This post was so heartfelt. It's amazing how pain can contribute to some of the greatest creativity. Honesty, Depth, and Sincerity....what can I say this one is a jewel.
     
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    i like this alot feeling it
     
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    Randee...:( I am SO sorry baby gurl...my deepest apologies and prays are wit u...i mean it my sista
     
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