Black Poetry : ...Lost Writings of LovelyGoldenOne...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What the hell is goin’ on inside this head of mine?
    Every word that I write down has to do with my demise
    Sometimes I feel that my updated writing is disguised
    And I don’t know how to get back to the ways that I devised…

    I reminisce of all the past happiness and joy
    That was in my poetry about those crazy boys
    The love poems and flows that gave me sense of peace
    Because then my mind was filled with simple ease

    Then one day I get a call telling me that I dying!
    The next thing I know, I can’t stop this deathly writing!
    Everything on paper has me spending my nights crying!
    And sometimes I honestly wish that all this were lying…

    Why can’t things go back to the way they used to be?!
    Why can’t I just be taken to heaven to spend eternity?!
    Instead of all the pain and deceit and unhappiness I see?
    That lives so deeply and roughly rooted inside of me…

    D*MN!
    I guess there’s nothing I can either say or do…
    But all this drama is a reality and either way I loose…
    I just wish I could go back and write the way I used to…
    And I guess there’s no way that I can change it even if I wanted to…
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these were just some thoughts that i needed to get out...
     
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    While the subject matters and events change within our lives, the beauty within our scribes are forever.......no matter how passionate, how painful, or how insightful...we leave legacies in our writings and looking back on them...sometimes we even grow and heal from them...Feeling your flow Lovely, no matter the subject...you are a poet...you write what is there and "that" is constantly changing.

    Sorry for the novel...just feeling this piece.
    Much luv,
    Angeli
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    for the solo mind
    love forth thou soul unto the life which self given
    and thereas love in the light be seen
    flow with less painful notions
    sistah i truely feel u here and i from the deepest heart felt
    emotions somewhat feel ya pain
    but unto u is the now and the faith forth is he unto u
    so allow self to mentally , spiritually feel the joy of love
    and life given
    we love u sistah and inside is a pray said daily for u
    let work together to caress some of the lingering pain that posed
    upon u ..
    ya Friend
    $R
     
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    Lovely...No matter what you write it always comes acrossed to me as brilliant. I agree with angelic. You write what's in your heart not what you think others want to hear and right now, that's what's going on in your life. Poetry is a release. So, release what you need to release. I know I don't mind, and I'm sure that no one else does. Eventually things will get better and you'll be able to write inspirational pieces of how you pulled through this storm in your life. I'm anticipating those pieces while I pray for you in your time of pain and sadness. Keep your head up sis, HE has a plan for you. Much Love, Alize:heart:
     
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    Break it down!

    We're all dyin' 2 hear more from you-
     
  7. Sierra

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    Hey Lovely,

    Inner feelings must come forth for us to go on in life. There is nothing wrong with expressing what's on your mind and what lies deep in your heart. I am willing to listen to anything you have to say. It is always beautiful and truthful and from your heart. Keep strong, girl. HE is there and has HIS arms around you and has you in HIS grace.

    This is a beautiful poem. I feel your emotions.

    All my love to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    I can feel you on this one---totally! Wonderful piece. :toast: Continue to flow.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou all for your wonderful words....they really have given me alot to think about...i just miss the way i used to write sometimes....but maybe this is God's plan for me....i don't know...i guess i just have to wait and see...
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anymore inputs?
     
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