Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lost sonnet....03

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 22, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pass the mountains
    Over the horizon
    Within the stars
    A tear falls
    Where pain shoots like lightening
    As the hurt roars like thunder
    the day is night
    Betrayal of the worse kind
    The vibes
    The signs
    It was nothing I fear so much
    Until you betrayed my love
    Ice forms over
    The heart that was black
    That came alive again
    But the ice took hold
    And covered
    A once open heart
    Holding nothing
    For nothing
    Within a dream made
    Of lies…..
    Pass the mountains
    Over the horizon
    Within the stars
    A tear falls
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep scribe and i felt da effects from the rippling lips
    tyte drop
     
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    Absolutely Beautiful *wiping my eyes*
     
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    Whoa, sister, this is truly phenomenal. I'm just like, wow!
     
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    Agreeing with all! I felt every word!
    Keep it comming Sis! Your pen is on
    fire! :hot:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh wow thanks famblee for the love on my little sad sonnet
    sometimes i just get the rush to flow and this came out...
    much love to you all thanks again
    Peace
    Angel
     
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