Black Poetry : Lost One

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lost you because
    life without the f is lie
    what I was livin
    didn't wanna admit
    without him couldn't think
    had to deaden my senses
    so my mind wouldn't think
    Took my drink to a whole new level
    Incredible Hulk had me ready 2 bellow
    smokin that sticky to keep it mellow
    while all the while inside me
    you were trying to BE
    I didn't know; if i had it
    woulda been different
    that love that i thought was missin
    coulda been shared between you and I
    to my unborn child
    mommy loves and misses you

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the fact that it would have been different, had you of known, must really cause you to ache. Sometimes we never know why we must experience the pain that we do. Emotively posed poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling you sista

    the truth will come one day

    i hope it happens

    feeling your love

    and yearning that lost soul

    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the pitted pain of bonding what could have been leaves one sadden deeply
    i can feel u more then u know .................................................................
     
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