Black Poetry : Lost of words

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo I never was sentimental
    dramatic or deferential
    But I'm at lost of words so I got to hit cha mental
    Rollin out these rhythms with my pencil
    Letting my mind collide with your potential
    fundamental
    position of my oblivion

    Words are gone
    and I'm losing all fun
    Got my mind going still can't find the right one
    Yet I'm still determined
    like a midnight phantom
    To find the word/ noun and give em'
    The right description
    To describe you......my ambition

    Can I get that verb
    or adverb
    To add to that ambition on the first and third
    That right word
    That makes my writing NOT obsurb
    It would be cool if the words
    traveled in herds
    And my hand started flying like a birds
    To write them all....but not today.... I'm dry like dirt
    I'm just looking for that word
    That RIGHT word
    To describe my knowledgable curb

    Can someone feel me on this?
    My mind feels unless
    I got to find that word to describe the protist
    and antagonist
    In my life of wishes
    But it's covered my bushes
    Shadowed and flowless
    Slash motionless
    I'm totally speechless

    I wish I could find that word to make me go on and on
    That right one
    That descriptive and objective one
    That word that's hard like stone
    Yet hits right home
    In my heart and then some
    Yeah, that word that speaks royalty from an African throne
    I just can't put my hand on the spot to find the right one
    In chess I would be a pun
    Looking for the right word and protecting the dun
    of kings.....yet I made the wrong move and I'm done
    My word.......where are you baby........I'm burn
    You are my most concern

    I'm looking for that word that can shelter me
    Noun, proverb, and a casuality
    Why is it hiding from such a foxylady
    I know I'm heard.........but it's a hypocrisy
    I need variety
    and piety
    in that word to descibe my diversity
    Am I looking to hard baby?
    That word......if you're out there..... call me baby
    Come describe "foxylady"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Cause I'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Speechless!!!!!!!!!
    And at a lost of words!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If the words were lost to you before, they aren't now. Hearing you and feeling you, in this wonderful expression.
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good lord, young lady, this is tighter than heyull. And I'm feelin you for real. Been tryin to find a bunch a words lately myself to describe the place in the road I'm at. This is one of your best flows yet, I think. :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like never land i feel ya on dis here speak on
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm

    a loss of words, hmmmm...lQQks like a plethora of words to me.....lol

    Nice drop sister foxi
     
  6. Datpoeticfemme

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    I likes this...you got madd skillz, I can't wait to read more from you.
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo, thanx for feelin this right here......madd luv to all of you
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol i'm feelin u all right happens to me all the tyme sis, u not alone, lol
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    LOL! If you lost the words,
    then I'm wondering who found them
    because this here is HOT!
     
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