Black Poetry : Lost Love "

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I
    stand by
    da
    waste side
    I
    see not
    da
    beauty of
    my love
    yet
    da emptyness
    of
    my soul
    leave a void
    in my heart
    I
    rest my head
    ova cast
    by teary eyes
    and
    love da once
    was
    she hold
    a piece of me
    stolen
    i've searched
    da land of free
    i've rumbled
    above
    yet not i see
    i chase da
    aroma
    she leave behind
    beyond
    my mental
    da
    memories
    lay by da
    waste side
    of
    lost love
    lost love
    lost love

    Will i ever
    roam free
    of dis
    captivity
    may my
    soul
    touch love
    again
    is she
    gone forever
    leaving da
    sweet
    bliss
    upon me
    where i stand
    by da waste side
    of
    lost L~O~V~E !?
    :confused:
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel your pain Rich. Nice piece.

    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FROM DA OUTSIDE LOOKING IN ..........GLAD U FEEL DIS ...THANKZ
     
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    Unrequited?

    Look at you... hee hee hee
    We goin have a luv fest up in hea!
    Baby, don't cry
    I hope you keep ya head up,

    Even when the road gets hard
    Never give up,

    Baby don't cry.

    Desert Storm
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought this was Great: I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stormy............ forth ya warmth is felt now my eyes dry and i smile

    windwalker ..............may i say thank u a million tymes glad u like it
     
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    intimately acquainted with the sentiment of this touching piece.

    beautifully scripted, $$RICH$$.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetly $Rich$

    Very moving piece.

    I believe I've chosen
    my favorite piece of yours. :)
    Until the next one. :wink:

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Big Thankz Baller.......it just came to me in da night

    COCO..... I am honored to know u enjoyed my mental piece
    my thoughts was running when i laid dis to paper...thank u
     
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    Rich

    If u r by the wastside now, don't worry, it won't be long before the night take flyte.
    Tyte flo my brutha!!
     
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