Black Poetry : lost love

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The key which unlock a soul of darken hate
    Once lost with lack of hope
    You found the lock
    Lighten the dark
    Took away the hate
    And gave it hope
    Upon receiving this heart
    You knew that you could not stay
    Dancing in my heart
    Turning it to love
    Knowing I would fall
    Unwilling to catch what you mended
    Leaving it to fold
    Unable to function with the love it lost
    What I feel
    Who I am
    I owe to you
    The bitter hatred
    The lack of trying
    Again
    My soul is dark knowing you could care less…..
    (Published 2002)
     
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    Girl, I shake my head cause I know exactly where you're coming from.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dat da hate
    has fallin str8
    da love roll in
    from above
    i stand by the garden watching
    u close and knowning ya love
    is a feelin, the darkness of shadows
    turn to light of beautiful colors
    da love of hate is no mate
    so i stand here and wait.....

    i feel every stroke and know dis all so well
    let it all out ...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love thank you you know i just had to go here and come out like that thanks....
    $$RICH$$
    disgusted but not ashame for i know
    i am the queen of some king....
    and u know you dont have to wait that long lol
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sista we must be kindred spirits...I got a scribe called the same thang :) I understand :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    COOL
    glad someone else understands as well
    thank you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know i feel u my flyte mate
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for some strange reason i know you do...lol
     
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