Black Poetry : Lost Love pt 2

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She looks in the mirror. Not realizing whom she has became
    The pain took her whole as the tears pour on the inside running
    like a waterfall of blood. Inside her sorrows ache, that goes un-notice.
    Lost of hope…

    For love stepped in and left quiet, in the wind all-alone
    in that once in a lifetime love affair story. Cursed beyond repair….
    The depths of her soul hurt as dull knives are placed in the heart
    How long must she cry? Standing in the mirror…thought this time was
    Well…Just was

    Tears burn like wild fire. Made of a dream, that was to good to be true.
    Were the simple words meaningless? I love you…makes you wonder.
    Reaching for the wind, was she holding on to nothing?
    Searching her being…
    Wondering why…
    For the tears run deep inside…un-noticed

    He is not here anymore to hold her near. To make the pain go away to wipe the tears,
    that run inside. Deep inside the pain screams…But goes un-noticed


    Takes her breath one last time
    All out of love…

    Once the heart is broken, no repair fixes it completely. Always damaged…


    (C) 2005
    untitled life​
     
  2. 1poetsought

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    We wear our scarred hearts out hurting each other ~

    Angel... let's colab again real soon, I dig your pen!
     
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    wow now Angel this one took the cake
    what u are manifesting is depth and power through
    the mist of love that's lost & found i enjoyed this one
    to the fullest u go gurl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    thanks 1poet and Rich for the loving support...happy yall enjoyed the flow

    peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel...

    Nice piece...very nice piece...very descriptive of the pain within.

    :thanks: for sharing your talent with us.

    :toast:
     
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    The pain tells you something isn’t right. Like acid rain. It will bring nothing but pain. Tears like rain on a plant lets you know. Blossom to a higher level it is time to grow. This is very nice. I enjoyed the Lost Love flow.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    Money n Hodee for the support happy u both enjoyed

    peace
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