Black Poetry : Lost letter....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How can you look in my face?
    And say you love me
    But playing games
    For when you think I don’t see
    I see
    But you say you love me
    How can you?
    When you do the things you do….
    My heart is yours never left
    But my mind sees shadows of betrayal
    All the rights and wrongs made us stronger
    But what I see don’t sit with me to well
    So what can I say? To let you know
    I aint feeling what’s in sight
    Used and abused
    Hurt to no return but thas my past
    But the games you play is bringing it all back
    Like a black cloud…
    The foul play and the misunderstandings
    Give us what we have today
    But I can’t help to think
    The one I love is betraying me
    And say he loves me too
    For my heart aches and my soul cries
    But I am in a hush
    Aint trying to go through drama or even fuss..
    But you proclaimed your love on me
    And I give it back….more and more each day
    Trying to shake the thoughts but for what I see
    ish aint right !!
    But you always seem to reassure me
    It’s you and me
    But it’s not what I see…
    So what do I do pretend I don’t see?
    For the betrayal I know and it hurts
    I know the pain that drives you insane
    But…
    Trust and honesty in my heart
    Am I blind?
    Out of the blue what I see
    Aint right….
    For it seems like hell
    Then you dance around and
    Claim
    Proclaim
    Things are so crazy intense
    That you love me..only me
    For I never knew
    What love was until I meet you
    Now all that have been said
    I hope you take it in
    Because I am not playing no game
    I have feelings and only human too
    So you tell me the deal….
    And I will chill
    No fuss

    (C) 2004​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy deep scribe from within
    expressing da emotions of da eyez
    and the feelings u pose inside let
    it all out now ( no fussing ) say it again !
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Very emotive...I can feel your dilemma...your confusion in this piece.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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    Feeling your pain!

    Let it flow out Sis!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With all this going on, seems like anyone would be confused. If it helps to release, release. Emotively laid.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    emotional piece
    and your line "should I pretend I don't see?"
    asks the question...
    only you can answer..
    thanks for sharing..
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...thank you fo da love and feeling the scribe :love:

    Monetary..it happens such is lif....thank you :angel1:

    PurpleMoons...happy ya feeling the write thanks sis:spin:

    watzinaname...thanks glad ya enjoyed

    deepy..indeed only can come from within...the answer is always there we all just have to learn to look within...thanks sis :spin:


    thank you all for enjoying my write.....Angel
     
  8. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh huh...put that poetry on the table honey. Loved it! :spinn:
     
  9. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That poem was tyte ma!!! Im really feelin it cuz my man is puttin me thru it right now. Keep writin cuz its ppl like u who inspire me to keep writin also!!! :coffee:
     
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    Wow, Angel, this was a deep piece. I hope whatever you are feeling is resolved soon. Blessings
     
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