Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lost in you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, May 5, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *well i dont know if its a poem
    just thoughts flowing in pieces..... :help:




    Took my love and ran with it
    Just a fool in love
    Upon the moon you took me
    In heavens doors…
    See I didn’t want it all
    Just a little would of did
    But that thing of a game
    I aint the one…
    I search to long
    To make a promise
    That I cant keep…..

    They say….

    Love is just a touch away
    Singing in the wind….

    Wrap in your warmth
    In the night you come
    in a hush
    And rush my mental
    And take my breath
    Sounds of love callin
    Oh what a sweet sound….

    But is it enough….

    I can sing heavens
    chorus

    flowin with ease
    from passion you bring……

    Fire burns..searchin
    Tryin to understand

    Love calls me
    ………….Towards you…

    And feed my mental
    Just………
    Lost in you….
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flows like a poem to me, like a stream of consciousness, deeply laid.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mental thoughts made it flow
    from da deep end and wit steam
    very well done from off the top
    of ya head .....wow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich i dont know it was just off the top
    and i went wit the thoughts
    glad ya likes.... :shades:

    watz dont know bout deep
    just a flow put together.... :glasses:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    very expressive. I feel the lost in this poem. :crying:

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    this poem was very beautiful
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love Money :spinstar:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love sis on dis..... :spinstar:
     
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